Today I had my students imitate William Carlos Williams' poem "The Red Wheelbarrow" during Sacred Writing Time. They speak for themselves.
so much depends
upon
the caring family
member
that took her
last
breath early that
July.
so much depends
upon
the bright flash
light
guiding you through
night
getting you home
safely.
so much depends
upon
the memories that
remain
of the sweetest
man
disintegrated in a
jar.
so much depends
upon
a pair of
shoes
sitting on my
feet
dancing while I
walk.
so much depends
upon
an orange furry
cat
skinny to the
bone
in our happy
home.
so much depends
upon
a black ankle
brace
glazed with
sweat
from a crying
dancer.
so much depends
upon
the gray storm's
rain
screaming with yellow
lightning
in the dark
sky.
so much depends
upon
a quiet little
girl
sitting on a
doorstep
beside the window
crying.
so much depends
upon
a navy blue
umbrella
keeping away the
water
while loud thunder
booms.
so much depends
upon
the teachers in
this school
to give you
an education
and get you through
times that are tough.
so much depends
upon
my dog at
home
waiting so
patiently
read to go
play.
so much depends
upon
the old stuffed
animal
that's there for
hugs
and there for
love.
so much depends
upon
the brushing of
pencils
across the white
page
forever drawing a
picture.
so much depends
upon
my parents loving
me
holding on to
memories
and making new
ones.
so much depends
upon
the nice clear
phone
playing all the
games
using all the data.
Wow some of these pack a punch in just a few words. But that's the power of poetry isn't it? Saying so much with so little. I enjoyed reading these.
ReplyDeleteThanks. They gave me chills.
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